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What's wrong with me?
Do you feel the way I do?
I think I love you and it's driving me nuts!
Why do I feel like this?
If you feel like me tell me.
I know it's hard to say
but I need to hear it;
do you LOVE ME?
I'll hate you don't say it,
but I'll hate me even more.
I think I could forgive you,
but could I forgive myself?
I'd be dying from the pain,
but I still couldn't hate you
and I never will.
©2006-2009 ~emoplatypus
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Resubmitting more stuff.

Yeah. I wrote this a LONG time ago. I found it hsoved in the corner of my desk and thought to my-self "This isn't half bad- for you." So here it is...

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:iconaj-sama:
Very nice! You convey emotions very nicely in this one, and I like it. :D

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"You can't wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club."
~Jack London
:iconpmsrhino:
Wheeee. Love blows. *nods*

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:heart: I LOVE TEH BUNNEH!!! :heart:
:iconemoplatypus:
Yeah, it's kind'a hard to imagine I was about 12 when I origianlly wrote this ^^;

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"They aim these thing at me. Everything's aimed at me" ~ King Cload, "The White Deer" by James Thurber
:iconemoplatypus:
:?

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"They aim these thing at me. Everything's aimed at me" ~ King Cload, "The White Deer" by James Thurber
:iconemoplatypus:
:hug: thank you.

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"They aim these thing at me. Everything's aimed at me" ~ King Cload, "The White Deer" by James Thurber
:iconaj-sama:
:D No prob'!

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"You can't wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club."
~Jack London
:iconpmsrhino:
Ah, such a wise 12 year old you were.

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:heart: I LOVE TEH BUNNEH!!! :heart:
:iconemoplatypus:
Why thank you.

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"They aim these thing at me. Everything's aimed at me" ~ King Cload, "The White Deer" by James Thurber

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